"Love's Choices"

         "Love's Choices"

 

His inner mind scales the mountain tops

In a dream of valor that does not stop.

He rides the rapids and swims the sea,

Invents fantasy miracles that will never be.

He dwells in Heaven in the safety of her arms

Loved and worry-free from all harm.

Her treasures offered more than any schemes,

He stays with both her and his dreams.

For his inner mind scales mountains galore

But remains chained, for he loved her more.

   

     Written by  Valentine

             [under copyright]

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem was amazing dear poet. You create places and vision of the struggle to keep love alive and strong.
"For his inner mind scales mountains galore
But remains chained, for he loved her more."
When we truly love. We love someone more than our own life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Valentine]

I think when two marry they should give their all to make it work. My husband traveled a lot of places before we married. I think sometimes he would have still wanted to go, but he would choose to be with me. He did leave me to go hunting and fishing though....... Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

We must change to make our number two content. He was a wise man.

[R Smith]

a beautiful poem Kathie, so much love and tenderness went into this, the passion is very clear :)

[Valentine]

Thank you Richard.

[Chris]

a grand and dear thought-flow

[Valentine]

Thank you Chris. Kathie

[Miss Sharon]

Beautifully written Valentine! Did he make the right choice? Did she? ~Sharon

[Valentine]

I pray so, God let me have him for 32 years. Kathie

[~]

Yes, there are many choices in love and if we always want what is best for the other one, we have made the right choice. :)

[Valentine]

Nice thought in your review..Kathie

[MsJewel]

I love the soft flow of this gorgeous poem Kathie...and the last two lines are breathtaking. A stunning romantic poem my friend.

:) Julie

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind comments. Kathie

[SmittyJas]

Beautiful love story told in a short poem stronger than the hearts desire His love for Her.

[Jamestown]

This is so well written, the flow is terrific and message is great,
"He dwells in heaven in the safety of her arms" beautiful imagery
pops in my head,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

every good dream,every good memory will be with us forever
and one day will be real you sa so much in so little space

[Lizardo]

"For his inner mind scales mountains galore
But remains chained, for he loved her more."
Wow, the name really goes with the poem...
What a nice piece you have here, really deep.