"Angel's Presence"

For my sister in Heaven!!

"Angels Presence"   Late last night, as I lie in restless sleep; I felt a strong presence so softly sweep.. Across the room...in a ballerina's grace The soft touch of angel's wings, crossed my face.   The lingering touch...warmed my cold heart, Carrying me to Heavens...distant parts. Such lovely dreams, of long flowing robes, And I slept on and on...in sweet repose.   I felt your warmth, enter the room, Angels and you...at once seemed to loom; And completely fill, my heart's empty space. With your face aglow...full of serene..grace.   An angel's wings tip..softly touched my hair, I felt the warm touch...so sweetly there; And...then the smile...upon your dear face Returning memories...of God's loving grace.   Thoughts return...of when you were with me, A perfect love...that I shared with thee. And I...always longing...for your return... Now the fading thoughts...of how I have yearned...   For...now to see you...just where you are.... Up dwelling with the angels...in a place so far. Then...seeing your face...filled with complete bliss, Finally...accepting the touch, of an angel's ...kiss.   I...now believe in angels...I saw their heavenly grace. I know...I felt their wings...softly...touch my face.   Written by.....Valentine [under copyright]     this poem was written when I was in the middle of deep pain from the loss Of my dear sister Lauretha..I so wanted her back with me but this dream made me realize how happy she was off in Heaven so far away with God and angels and Christ..But,,God knows of how I still miss her and her sweet face and thoughts of when we were having so much fun on this earth.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Cast in a magic of hurt and joy you have become an angel that we enjoy.

regards,
al

[Cassie]

This was such a lovely dream and am happy you find peace in that your sister is with the angels. I like the imagery as well, so sorry for your sisters loss

[Ted Kniffen]

Well written. It's nice to believe in angels and nicer to have been in the presence of one, dreaming or awake.

[Valentine]

Yes it was at the time. Kathie

[Paul Bell]

Take it your sister was quite young when she died. Always nice to know she's still around. Gives you faith.

[Valentine]

No, she died a few years ago. Kathie

[HeartInTheDark]

Many want to have something returned from them that will never be, acceptance of this this is when you finally reach the final stage of grief, when you know they aren't coming back you don't get over the fact they are gone, that isn't possible, but you understand and you keep on living and don't let it tie you down.
this is a lovely piece and nearly made me cry once i realised what it was about.

[Valentine]

This is a true poem and I actually had this dream. I even saw where the pinions [feathers] went into their skin. It was awesome. Kathie

[Lorry]

I now believe in angels sums this piece up perfectly Kathie. During a very rough time in my life, I saw and felt a presence that had no bodily image, yet I knew it was my Dad. Bizarre as it sounds, I also knew that he was saying no, in answer to the thought in my head at the time. I still can't explain it, I am not in any way spiritual, yet to me it was him as plain as the nose on my face. Maybe this world wouldn't be such a bad place if more of us did believe in angels and knew that this life wasn't the end we rather presumptuously think it to be.
Sorry for your loss. Beautiful words.

[Valentine]

Thank you Nemo, and I will see her again one day in Heaven. Kathie

[Patricia Wedel]

A very sweet endearing poem of memories
of a sister who shared your life. A lovely
tribute in repose. truly, Pat

[Valentine]

Patricia, the dream was real, and brought me peace. Kathie

[sinNsincerity]

Such a lovely poem Valentine, a ballerina's grace indeed.

[Valentine]

Thank you for reading my write. Kathie

[Stanley R. Teater]

A lovely piece. Did writing it help ease your pain? I hope so.

[Valentine]

Stanley. oh yes. To have her back and suffer like she did would have been to much to see again. Kathie

[D Connolly]

I've had a dream like that, and it does bring such peace. I'm glad you were able to have that dream, and that it made you feel better about losing your sister Lauretha

[Valentine]

Knowing she will be seeing me again in Heaven is an awesome feeling. I miss her. Kathie