""A Single Rose"

 

    "A Single Rose"

 

     So much beauty,

in one single rose;

     Petals cut perfect,

sweet effervesence flows.

     For many...it takes,

a massive bouquet;

     For a lover to speak,

his ..."I love you"...today.

     But one single flower,

that comes picked by you;

     Speaks more words to this heart,

than a dozen could do.

             Valentine

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully penned!

[JanieB]

Really lovely. :)

[Luis Gabriel]

beautiful, less is more both in life sometimes and in writing and I think you used effective minimalism here!

[Emily B]

one single flower, maybe even just one petal :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautiful. . Great job!!!

[Robert Wilson]

You should write for Hallmark. You would make millions!

[Rylan Batten]

i really like this too. the rhyming works well, and the meaning is simple, but strong. good job!

[Catala]

I agree a single rose by that certain someone, is so much more than anything from the over zealous bouquets of the world... To be sure, flowers picked on the way home from the side of the road, were always my favorites :)

You have a beautiful piece here, a very enjoyable piece.