Please tell Me

      Please Tell Me

 

Just what would it take,

for me...

to reach inside

of your heart?

Stir up all of

the old memories

we once had,

before love did depart.

How can I

reach deeply into

your heart and

into your soul?

Try to recapture

just what is needed,

to help me make

my life again whole.

Will you let old

memories walk

slowly through your

heart and your mind.

Uncover pictures

of the bliss

and heaven found

in sweet olden times.

Please let me

take a few

moments to bask

in the distant past.

The long days before

our love fell apart

with no chance

to ever last!

Just what would it take,

to reach inside of

your  heart

and reach your soul?

Find the broken

pieces needed

to make our lives

again whole.

     Valentine  3-8-08

Author's Note

Just trying a new approach to an old poem of mine..God bless..Valentine

Reviews

[None]

Very emotional and sad. If we could only tell people how they should feel, it would all work out fine. Nicely written!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like the new approach. This sounds so heartfelt and so much longing and hoping to find the missing pieces.
I enjoyed this .. a bit sad but very lovely to read.

Chloe
xoxo

[Carole]

This is beautiful. Purports so many questions of a heart that is broken-possibly with many walls. It sets us to wondering, what we can do with a person such as this to reach them...? This saddens me some what. It is also a picture of a love that has gotten lost and needs restoration--and wholeness--It's hard to see that in any relationship, because without nurture, that is exactly what happens. It can slip away just like that if we don't work at it. I have seen many relationships restored though, and I know "All things are possible, to those that believe..." Well done. A picture so many can relate to, Valentine...

[Rylan Batten]

very thoughtful, very deep. I enjoyed it a lot, it's thought provoking. thanks for posting!

[PoemRodent]

Nice and with good flow...

Love and thoughts,

Dostani

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

wow. that hit me, cant tell you how many times i've felt that. nicely done.


great write,
rayne