Glimpse Of Hope

     "Glimpse Of Hope"

 

The dark of night...closes in.

Erasing all light, where day had been.

 

Leaving a glimpse ,a promise of hope;

As stars come out, helping me cope..

 

Helping, to bring cheer, to the heart;

Give this life, a brand new start..

 

Hiding hopelessly from, all love and dreams.

Thinking of  life, as an impossible thing.

 

Standing...looking , up into  the sky...

And wondering, as I ask..." God why?"

 

Will those tiny beams aid my sight,

As I try to walk back into the daylight?

 

Bringing some hope of finding a new life...

Without you, and this sadness and strife.

 

Up all night thinking of how and what to do.

As I dream and ponder. my way...without you,

And my world of lost dreams.

       Valentine

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sad and powerful use of words and thoughts dear friend.
"Up all night thinking of how and what to do.
As I dream and ponder. my way...without you,"
Love make us smile and can make us so sad. Always a pleasure to read your work my friend.
Coyote

[APOORVA]

The dark of night...closes in.
Erasing all light, where day had been.
BEAUTIFUL START.


Bringing some hope of finding a new life...
Without you, and this sadness and strife.
I THINK MOVING ON IN LIFE AFTER FORGETTING SOMETHING ONCE WAS MOST PRECIOUS IS AS DIFFICULT AS NOTHING ELSE.

WELL DONE MATE !! KEEP UP

[Terry O'Leary]

Life goes on... hope paves the way... nice poem!
Terry

[Valentine]

Thank you Terry. Kathie

[Ted Kniffen]

Sadly, there is little we can do about loss, painful as it is, except hope that our loved ones have achieved a better place. Good write, Kathie

[Valentine]

Ted, thank you for your kind words. It does ease and I have been invited out to dinner, feels odd but I think I will do it. Kathie

[wordman]

what are we without hope and dreams

[Valentine]

Ron, after those to leave we just have the memories. Kathie

[Aries1984]

Life is an interesting journey, how we still find strength to dream and ponder without our loved ones is something that is of a mystery to me still.

[Valentine]

Loss through death, there is no one to blame. Lose another way and you can blame the other or yourself. Loss hurts. Kathie

[FreedomFighter]

Hope is something we all hope to keep inside of ourselves to go that extra mile

[Valentine]

It was very hard for me after the loss of my husband. Kathie

[Jenny]

Thank you for sharing

such an honest and heartfelt write

J

[Valentine]

Losing someone hurts. Kathie

[Jenny]

it most certainly does

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhhhh so sad in closing!! i was into the hope of all the rest ;)) but alas ..life does deliver quite the blows at times ...feeling like a crumpled rag ..no bones to it to even attempt to rise ;{
E.

[Valentine]

This was personal and the words just found their way to paper. Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

:( .................

[Chris A Jones]

Everyone needs a little hope. Thanks for sharing.

[Valentine]

Yes they do. Kathie