Hurry

         "Hurry"

 

Come for me for I am waiting.

Hurry now...no hesitating.

I've waited years...for life and love,

Come for me...sent from above.

A true love, that is all mine.

One to last, until the end...of time.

      Valentine

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man! can i ever relate to this .. once that need to mate strikes ..it is relentless .. hormones rage .. testosterone peaks ... impossible to lend any "good sense" to the mix at all .. the brain is out to lunch ;) it gives legitimacy to parents making the decision in days gone by, for us ... i like the looking above .. and my conjured scene is of a young lady sitting on her bed ..pining but seeking guidance .. so patient as well .. though certainly in a "Hurry" :)
E.

[Valentine]

Your review sounds like my sisters grandson who is 19, and got a 16 year old Mexican illegal pregnant. Her family tossed her out and the mother moved, afraid of getting caught and deported. So, the government is paying for her as long as she finishes school which is 3 more years. She could end up deported and the baby left here. WHEW..Kathie

[Einstein Noodle]

WHEW indeed ... with the loss of the mind we just don't care ... hopefully our President Elect will really strengthen and enforce our laws. last time i looked it is the parents who are responsible for minor children. life in any country illegally is a big mistake. Look what happened to Retired Marine Sgt. Andrew Tahmooressir, who got lost while hunting; did the right thing and turned himself in to Mexican police; was promptly arrested and in jail almost a year with no help from Pres. Obama .. and he wasn't trying to stay there .. he needed directions back to the American side .. Whew again!

[Gee]

No need to be rushing anywhere Valentine, he'll be waiting, as I will when I leave my wife behind, for however long it takes. Then eternity together

[Valentine]

Gee, this was written when he was still with me. The idea came from a Country Song. Kathie

[Willard Wells]

Very nice search for love. Then the joy and happiness once it's found.

[Valentine]

Will, been going through many poems in folders and putting some on that have not been on site yet. This is from 2009. Thanks for stopping by. Kathie