Lost Bliss

                   'Lost Bliss'

            Was it only a dream...
        Or...in that long ago time;
          For a space in our lives,
              Were you...mine?

        There are dreams of days,
             Of joy and laughter;
             Grace in your touch...
     A promise of Heaven ever after.

        Such an ache and longing...
       For something long missed.
     Still haunted...by your memory,
         And Heaven's...lost bliss.

                    Valentine

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Hard to believe such a bond could ever truly be lost.
Profoundly lovely creation, Valentine!

[Valentine]

Thank you for reviewing my scribble. Kathie

[Wesley Dingler]

So far I love it. I was just wondering if it were done yet? Or is there a slightly more expansive version?
Either way, I love it. I know the feeling, too, of "lost bliss"" or lost light. So sad but so good.


-wes

[Valentine]

Wes, just some of my thoughts about someone I knew many years ago. I often wonder how fate treated him. Kathie

[Wesley Dingler]

Someone you knew in a passed life, eh? Well, if we can hope fate treated him well, then I guess we should hope just that.