"Black Fire"

         "Black Fire"

The sun rises...and welcomes a brand new day.

Day and night separate...and lets dreams lay.

Awaiting the sunset, when light and dark embrace;

Black caressing the moon, like a lover's face.

The sun, a fire that night only can quench the flames.

Night embraces the moon, over...once again.

Man touches woman...in the darkness of the night;

Separating at sunrise...in the morning light.

She is the fire...the light of each sun rise;

He the black of night, leaving moonlight in the eyes.

One has the power, to quench the others flame...

The other the strength...to reflect the light again.

Sunrise...when light and dark...separate;

Sunset, when light and dark...meet...and embrace.

             Valentine

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Very creative and beautifully written,
the structure is really cool, the last stanza
is fantastic:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

Thank you for taking the time to read my write. Kathie

[andrew mitchell]

very clever put together, the comparisons like the ying and the yang. A lovely write

[Valentine]

Thank you Andrew. Always appreciate your reviews. Kathie