"Fly Away"

"Fly Away"

Fly away to a haven, far away and above,
Where love is more, than just a mere word.
A place that lies...hazy on the mind,
But offers hope, and pleasures oh so kind.

A haven for all of the...weak at heart,
A place to begin a brand new start.
Far away, from things that are unkind;
Away from where, the blind lead the blind.

Fly away to a place in my arms;
My love will keep you, safe from all harm.
Hope is there and also...pleasures untold,
Love offers a life, worth more than mere gold.

Love is more, than just a mere word;
Where teardrops in silence...can be heard.
   Valentine

Reviews

[Zahra]

Love is more, than just a mere word;
Where teardrops in silence...can be heard.
beautifully penned my friend. honest words

[The Black Warrior]

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! :D

I LOVED IT from beginning to the end...it is just beautiful... a work of perfection!

I went "Hoooooo!" when I read this part, for it is so true...hahaha I truly loved it and enjoy it :)

A haven for all of the...weak at heart,
A place to begin a brand new start.
Far away, from things that are unkind;
Away from where, the blind lead the blind.

100/100 "D

[armin]

wow, what a fancy dream this poem has nice flow beautiful one.
Fly away to a place in my arms;
My love will keep you, safe from all harm.
Hope is there and also...pleasures untold,
Love offers a life, worth more than mere gold.

Liked that stanza very much.

armin. ...

[R Smith]

oh to fly away to that place, its a dream i guess but a beautiful poem Kathie :)

[Lizardo]

It's true that sometimes we want to ''fly away'' from our problems and go to different places.
the last lines gives a nice endind to poem.
Great work!