"Leave It Lay"

      "Leave It Lay"

 

Leave love here,

Where it has died.

Beyond all fear...

Beneath tears cried.

 

Let it wither

On the vine;

Gone forever...

Severed ties that bind.

 

Let love lay,

Upon the sod;

Atop the clay,

Before it's God.

 

Where it has died,

Leave it sit,

No tears cried...

All goodbyes met.

 

Let the sun,

Erase love's soul,

As death runs...

Dried , until no longer whole.

 

Set it free,

Just let it lay...

It all was to be...

So forget this day.

 

At sun-up...

New love is born.

Begin anew...

Tomorrow morn!

 

Valentine 

Reviews

[wordman]

a cycle of love,death and re birth,creative write,one of your best !

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind words Ron. Send me some requests. Kathie

[wordman]

haven`t wrote anything in a while,you`re welcome

[richieb]

Love is in the natural cycle of nature and seasons. It doesn't always satisfy our yearns and wants. Love is ever flowing like a butterfly. Flirting with capture, playing hide and seek.Your poem captures all of this.
Fine writing Valentine, I enjoyed your poem.
Richie

[Valentine]

Thank you for your kind review. Kathie

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and good words shared my friend.
"At sun-up...
New love is born.
Begin anew...
Tomorrow morn!"
I liked the above lines. Words to live by. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[I am that I am]

This is great. It seems that all things are moving in a cycle such as this. Withering away, and being born anew. Thanks for sharing this, Valentine.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A delightful and heart felt piece that craves for affection and exudes love, well done, good read.

[Valentine]

You are more than welcome. Kathie