"Wings"

   "Wings"

If love had wings

It would fly

To your door;

Seeking entrance...

To offer itself

And so much more.

It would

Shyly knock...

Take one look

At your face,

Offer itself...

To all old fears

And tears

Finally erase.

If love

Had wings,

It would come...

Straight to you,

Climb into

Your heart...

And stay...

All life through.

If only love had wings! Valentine

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

such a beautiful thought Kathie...love this write! :)

[Valentine]

You are more than welcome. Kathie

[Melinda McQueen]

Lovely. What a thought.
It reminds me of a poem I wrote years ago, "If My Heart Had Wings".
This is a good write.

[Valentine]

Similar thoughts of love...come from our hearts. Kathie

[Perkele.7885]

If love had wings! Such a lovely title that only a poem such as yours should follow. Take a bow Ms. Kathy!

[Valentine]

Thank you for your comments Raj. If you do not start spelling my name the way my mom made it. I will change the spelling of yours..LAUGHING>>>Kathie

[Chris]

"...if only..."

warm and touching... sweet tones and flow as well.

[Valentine]

Thank you Chris, always enjoy your reviews. Kathie

[DoormanDan]

I agree with Mannat, this poem does have a interesting concept behind it. Well, if love did have wings, we'd all have to hope that no hunter ended up mistaking it for a bird, would we? That would NOT be good for society as a whole. Anyway, this is a very beautiful poem, and has a lot of wonderful imagery in it. Great job! :)

[Valentine]

Dan, don't forget that angels have wings. It would be beautiful if love flew into a heart on an angels wings. Kathie

[DoormanDan]

Indeed it would :)

[Samaira]

Love having wings would be interesting. Nice concept.