"Wings"

"Wings"

A Poem by Valentine

   "Wings"

If love had wings

It would fly

To your door;

Seeking entrance...

To offer itself

And so much more.

It would

Shyly knock...

Take one look

At your face,

Offer itself...

To all old fears

And tears

Finally erase.

If love

Had wings,

It would come...

Straight to you,

Climb into

Your heart...

And stay...

All life through.

If only love had wings! Valentine



© 2012 Valentine


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Darling if love had wings it would say sentimental things.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful and hopeful thoughts.
"All life through.
If only love had wings! Valentine"
Sometime all we have is hope. One day we shall find our beloved once again. Thank you for sharing the powerful poetry dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


If only we did have wings. A very tender piece were Valentine.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you Robert for your kind words. Kathie
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giving love wings so it can land on the hearts of people and nudge them towards doing the right thing. If only your wishes could always come true. Your heart sings of beautiful things!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweet review. Kathie
An endearing, romantic poem. well done !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie, I always appreciate your input ..Kathie
if only Kathie, we could send love everywhere, it might change the world, lovely write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Changing the world will take more than just wings I am afraid. Personally I do not see how one can h.. read more
beautiful and lovely write.
I enjoyed the read.
Good job.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by. Kathie
So very beautiful... a deep, tender longing to fly across the distance and be one... I so often ache for wings too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you Craig. Kathie
I like the melody of this poem


Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry. Kathie
A lovely write Kathie from the heart

Posted 9 Years Ago


Valentine

9 Years Ago

The winds movement over stationary objects, making them dance to its own melody is awesome. Kathie

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