Could I?

Could I?

A Poem by Val
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I like how it sounds. It is very generic for maybe a lot of people in the world though.

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Could I be an angel floating down from the bright blue sky? Or could I be a devilish soul waiting and stalking my kill like a tiger?
Should I be a peaceful person that everyones loves and can relate to? Or should I be a hated young woman that is envious of what everyone does?
Will I be an inspiring person that lets everyone know how I feel in a reasonable way? Or will I be a disrespectful person that spits and scoffs at whenever anyone mentions love?
Could I be myself? Or could I be you?

© 2008 Val


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Great poem! I loved the way you described everything you talked about. The poem makes me think of all these different people and how different they are... of course, but then at the end, you made me think of the things they all have in common and how similar they all are... maybe that's badly explained from what I'm saying, but I think you did a great job on the poem. Oh yeah, that last part made the whole thing become really interesting!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on March 9, 2008

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i luv fantasy and fairytale fictions. more..

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A Poem by Val