Pleasure

There once was a time when life was quite simple. 

However, that wasn’t sublime enough to please the pimple.

Reviews

[I Confess, I Digress]

Does simplicity truly beget pleasure? Nice job with the brevity. And I hope that pimple was figurative...

one last thing, a note on diction:
"sublime"
great. 'nough said.

[GuyOfRomance]

Love it, short and straight to point ^^

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Was life simple before you got pimples? lol (:

[kirsten773]

i like ittt!