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A Poem by Valandil93
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A poem to a best friend about our friendship.

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Many things are hard, 
But none as much as this.
So prepare for the avant-garde 
Cause this poem should be better than piss. 

It all stemmed from a single text
And though we decided to pursue
We didn’t know what would come next
We hadn’t even a clue.

This is a friendship 
Founded upon lot’s of luff,
So let’s get past the hardship
And move on with this stuff.

There is no scorn
Between us,
Just turtle porn.
So please don’t fuss.

We are the Pizza God
And the Pizza Goddess.
No, we are not odd
We profess. 

Tim Lincecum
Is who half of us
Think is awesome
Besides, his hair is a plus.

We are pretty similar
For two of a kind,
Though we live far
We don’t mind.

One of us has
Beautiful green eyes
The other a beautiful a*s
Sorry, those are some lies

Just joking, 
only the second one.
So quit your poking,
This aint no fun.

Music by Mike Pinto,
Timmy the bird,
These are things we know,
Things that have occurred.

We’ve only known each other 
For about 210 days,
Let’s expand that another
Gazillian days.

That last stanza kinda sucked,
Especially the rhyming,
So let me construct
A good ending.

KIRSTEN IS AMAZING
I am less so, 
Her hair is a-blazing, 
It’s not faux. 

This marks the end
Of this epic poem,
It needs not amend
Cause it is so awesome. 

© 2011 Valandil93


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haha nice!(:
'cause this poem should be better than piss' :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you but i still believe yours was better :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i cant put 5 million as a ranking!!!!! ): this was FREAKING AWESOME!!!! i luff youuuuu!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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