Please don't run

Please don't run

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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But I get it if you do

"
Stinking skunk
Walking like a drunk
Waddling around the park during lunch
Mothers grab their children and run
But all I wanted was to have a little fun...
A game of chase
Or maybe a race
I never had intention to spray you in the face
...I wish that when I went somewhere, I didn't always clear out the place.
They act as if I'm some kind of repellant.
...Like scent is even relevant.
All I ever wanted was to find a friend.
I suppose tomorrow I can try again.

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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This skunk some think
was well-meant
but it actually was
super badly bent

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave Brown

4 Years Ago

just as well I couldn't read more
I've already been chastised
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

sometimes it just falls in the perfect place and ends up being better than anything i could have sai.. read more
Dave Brown

4 Years Ago

( LOL )
I can't help but think of Pepe le pew.
He was so cute chasing after that black girl cat with the white stripe.
Charming fellow despite the obvious aroma.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

:)
welcome to the party, then.
My name is the madness. I'll be your host...
Papaya

4 Years Ago

I'll be your server
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Error in transfer.
153777 data blocks expelled.
I could visualise the scene you depicted in this humour filled rhyme. My heart goes out to 'Skunky' but not sure I would stay too close myself!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

you and so many others
:)
John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

I think I thunk
dat skunk was drunk.
What a sad little poem :) Lonely little skunk who wants to make friends but doesn't know anything about etiquette.Lesson here. Humans are like that too :)

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

:)
Yeah but they're really freaking cute.
You can't deny that.
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Humans can be, skunks not :))
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Agree to disagree ;)

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Added on September 7, 2020
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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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