...Sherlock

https://youtu.be/-HW7nj-GUZY

Drawing lines is good, and fine

To help establish rules

But you've been drawing dotted lines

And playing me the fool

It's, ok... I think it's fun

To watch you in the sand

Drawing lines over themselves

And wondering what you've planned

Pull the wool right round my eyes

And spin me in a circle

Whisper all the sweetest lies

And show me truth is hurtful

Tear me down and build me up

And tear me down again

I'll call you my pudding cup

And you can call me 'friend'

I'd take a kiss but only if

It's followed by a slap

And a second one, to follow this

To show me that you're mad

I've never seen a girl like you

So gentle, yet so fierce

And now I want a woman who's

Like that, to share some years

The lines you draw, I take to heart

And don't intend to cross

But I don't mind it when you do...

You can be the boss.

I watch you overstep them, then

I watch you duck right back again

You think that you have slipped my hands

But I told you once: I let you win.

Reviews

[Inessa]

Sounds more like you prefer to be a Watson; sidekick to the main show. Not sure if Holmes ever had a dominatrix streak, though. And to be honest, i dont even want to think about it. Some men like their ladies tough, others light as fluff. Its all in the twist. Interesting write.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Sherlock... Watson...
I prefer to be the puddle of chocolate underfoot.
Really, its just another exercise in nonsense :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Ah, this was a joy to read. I really like the title it gave insight to your poem than to merely define or title it for me. And the stanza about the slap made me laugh. Tyfs

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Lol that might be my favorite part, too.
Thx for stopping by!
:)

[Papaya]

First off, clever title. I've filled in the blanks there. :)
The poem is cute and fun. (:

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Lol thank you :)
A little sado-masochistic, but no one ever said that was a bad thing.
Right, guys?
Guys?
Hey... Where are you going?!

[Papaya]

Umm, yeah. No comment on that one.