Tao do u do?

Tao do u do?

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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What zen?

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Two birch twigs
Floating in a stream
Pass under a bridge
Not knowing what it means
Jostling, spinning, jockeying for space
But neither will win
Life's not a race

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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Very clever to take inspiration from a seemingly simple thing and turn it into something meaningful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

It was always meaningful to me, I just didn't know why.
The Tao of Pooh helped me understand .. read more
A visual little write. I agree life is not a race. It speeds up enough as you get older. Wishing those twigs a slow flow downstream.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Thx :)

Pooh Bear is something of a hero of mine.
This was his favorite game.
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Ah yes, remember it well. That bear had and still has many friends:)
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Silly old bear...

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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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