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A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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There's Ringing bells
And Cooking smells
Whirling around like bats in hell
She's musical
The way she moves
The way she bakes
The way she stews
A triangle
Of silver mirth
Rings out its call upon the earth
And with that sound
comes dinnertime
We gather round
and eat like swine
With dancing chefs
and bells that chime
...I don't know which is fairer

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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And then we all put our dishes in the sink, say thank you and do the washing up. Because good boys and girls that want lots of choccy christmas goodies know how to be good and that Santa is always watching... Which along with the big beardy guy in the clouds, seems a little too creepy to me, but hey ho, you gotta be in it to win it 😀
Only 115 shopping days left until xmas 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well....it certainly sounds like a Wuhan chef! Bats in hell, eating like swines...yep...definitely Wuhan! I would be careful of what you eat in this establishment! Did i just hear a cough?? Nice flow and rhyme here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


And then we all put our dishes in the sink, say thank you and do the washing up. Because good boys and girls that want lots of choccy christmas goodies know how to be good and that Santa is always watching... Which along with the big beardy guy in the clouds, seems a little too creepy to me, but hey ho, you gotta be in it to win it 😀
Only 115 shopping days left until xmas 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's something about this that makes me envision a Lewis Carroll scene, and I dig it. Being the tired old chef at my house, I'd truly love to sit at that table.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Tired, old chefs: Unite!!!
Yeah, she sounds like quite a show, right?
This is fun and sing songy. It's great!
Brings to mind that hot chocolate scene from The Polar Express. Do you know it?
It's a great scene. Very fun.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

I remember having the book, and going to see the movie in the theater!
And everything that wa.. read more
Papaya

4 Years Ago

Why am I not surprised.
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Womanly intuition?

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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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