White chocolate days

White chocolate days

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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Thank god they're gone forever

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Each face that hangs on the gallery wall
smiles at me
I hate them all
Even those I've never met
I hate them all
And hope for their deaths

Their plastic skin and pearly teeth
Glistening
Like pigs in heat
And all they are, deep within
Are pigs in heat
And they stink of gin

The memory of them resides
Beneath the glass
That I imbibe
And everything they gave to me
That I imbibe
Is toxic

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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This reads like the nightmare of all nightmares. It runs deep. Very deep. Whoever they are, they have left behind toxicity. In my mind I am drawn towards, drink, drugs and abuse. If I am reading this correctly, stay away, far away. Conveyed well.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Nailed it. More or less.
It's my ex wife and her family lol
And maybe part my old boss.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Do you play darts? I've always found that to be quite therapeutic :))
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

No, but I have my ways :)
Graveyards, forests, and abandoned churches are nice.
And ha.. read more



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You ain't dripping chocolate here for sure. Very unlike your stuff but powerful all the same. Loathing felt potently.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Chocolate can get dark, sometimes
:)
Bitter can have an interesting aftertaste, at the.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

4 Years Ago

The darker the better. Bland is boring.
You're doing good :)
Oh, ouch. Whoever this is directed at, ouch.
Venom, and spice spitting not so nice here

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

:)
It's in the past. Sometimes things trigger memories, though. And it's good to get them out.. read more
Wow! The pain and anger expressed here runs deep in each word. Like raw nerves touched by the past and its black breath.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Lol yeah, it wasn't a fun time
I love the deep derision that your narrator shows about all the fools that have evidently oppressed him/her. I love white chocolate much better than the brown kind so I wasn't expecting to think of white chocolate as possibly being white people that oppress. I'm not into watching either political convention, but I heard it said that the RNC is trotting out mostly (or all) white people. I happen to feel that pigs at a trough slurping up kickbacks & stinking of gin kinda reminds me of the way our ruling class is largely rich white males. I'm at risk of offending half the population so I better shut up now. I wish I could let it all out someday & describe those I despise as pigs. My feeble attempts to be politically correct are crumbling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

You LIKE white chocolate?...
Heretic!!!
Kill the non believer!!!
This reads like the nightmare of all nightmares. It runs deep. Very deep. Whoever they are, they have left behind toxicity. In my mind I am drawn towards, drink, drugs and abuse. If I am reading this correctly, stay away, far away. Conveyed well.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Nailed it. More or less.
It's my ex wife and her family lol
And maybe part my old boss.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Do you play darts? I've always found that to be quite therapeutic :))
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

No, but I have my ways :)
Graveyards, forests, and abandoned churches are nice.
And ha.. read more

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Added on August 27, 2020
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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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