Liar

Liar

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
"

I knew you were musical

"
I woke up in fear
That it was a dream
The voices I hear
Had all ceased to scream
The noise in my ear,
Now honey and cream
Smiling, and silly

Shaking my head
And starting to rise
I fell out of bed
And I rubbed my eyes
I looked at my phone
In delight and surprise
I sighed, and I felt giddy

I turned it on
And there it was
A nice ripened fruit 
And the tale of a bug
I didn't know there
Was ever so much
Sweetness left to listen

It prickled my ears
And tickled my brain
I sat down in fear
That I'd fall (again)
Then I felt the tears
Dried up on my face
That's about when it hit me

So here I still sit
Cellphone in hand
Trying to make sense of it
However I can
Rewriting words, and
Removing stanzas
Admiring how you'd fit me

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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Disoriented? That's bad...
I like your rhymes here. It's always interesting to me when "again" is used in rhyming.
I sometimes wonder if people pronounce it as "a-gain" or "a-gen" as in rhyming with "when".


Posted 4 Years Ago


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Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

I think it depends on how English you are?
And disoriented is ok. It goes away with coffee.read more
Papaya

4 Years Ago

Coffee - yes! I need some!
Good morning. The wildlife is rather tame this morning. They .. read more

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Added on August 24, 2020
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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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