Motherlove

Motherlove

A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
"

Ma... I love you, but seriously... You gotta chill on that s**t.

"
Go!
 Go!
  Go!
But, go slowly. Don't rush.

Row!
 Row!
  Row!
Your boat, calm as a duck.

Stop!
 Stop!
  Stop!
But don't panic. There's time.

Still, though...
Go!
 Go!
  Go!
Before everything's fine.

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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A perfect summation of the frantic nature of a Mother's love. Frenzied. Ballistic. Annoying at times, but always precious. I love your contrasts here. I can certainly relate from my own experience. Passive aggressiveness at its finest....that is a Mother.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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A perfect summation of the frantic nature of a Mother's love. Frenzied. Ballistic. Annoying at times, but always precious. I love your contrasts here. I can certainly relate from my own experience. Passive aggressiveness at its finest....that is a Mother.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mother's always mean well but I'm told by my kids that I'm "epic" but also the MOST annoying when it comes to some things.

This is cute. I love the simplicity of it.
Almost in the style of "Go Dog Go"

:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2020
Last Updated on August 11, 2020
Tags: Mother, guilt trip, passive aggressive, insanity, apoplexy

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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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