Many Forgivenesses Begged

And far too many liberties taken

Pretty bird, little bird, pretty please don't fly

I've a wish for a fish, for a Cajun fry

And a bird, such a bird as you seem to be

Would enjoy to employ such a thing for free

There's a place, made of grace, and the headiest wine

Where I've slept, and I've dreamt, near a dozen times

In the wood, there I stood, and I watched you cry

Laying there, with your hair spilling down your spine

And I wished, like the fish, to be free of my

Tethered bonds. I'd respond. And I'd make you mine.

Reviews

[Papaya]

This is adorable. I've never seen hair as a tag before. :)
Your gingerbread witch, I imagine her hair as fiery red as the flame upon which she melts her chocolate.

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

She can be whatever color she likes. :)
Personally, I enjoy the original cola flavor.
It's easier for the chocolate to hide.

Thank you :)
Adorable might be my favorite compliment ever. Made my night.

[Papaya]

I see cavities in your future if you're not careful

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Bring it. I'm not scared of the dentist.
They like me because I fall asleep.

[Papaya]

Are you sure? Maybe they don't like you? So they knock you out. And then God only knows what they do to you. Seriously...

[Dripping Chocolate Madness]

Jeez I'd hate to know what you do to people you DO like...
Twisted, strange person.

[Papaya]

:)(: many forgivenesses begged