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A Poem by Dripping Chocolate Madness
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It was a standard deviation. Everything is back to normal, now. (thank goodness)

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I walked the Rock candy footstones 
that plot the path to your door;
Gingerbread Oak and a Gumdrop threshold.
And I see you inside, through sugar glass window panes,
Smiling and stirring your pot.
Come out, little witch. For, I no longer fear you.
Come out to play.
Come out with your Toll House temptations, and ply my mind with contented surrender.
I recognize your upturned lip, and your shying of the cheek. 
I recognize your dangling curl and your ravenous eye. 
And I know for what your soul hungers.
Come out, little witch. 
For, you are equal parts sad and beautiful and fascinating.
Come out from your fairy tale. 
And come into mine.

© 2020 Dripping Chocolate Madness


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Standard deviation makes me think of math always but here I think of a young man wandering a different path and finding himself bewitched by some beauty he gazes upon. Does he wish to sample her sweets or steal her away to a happily ever after tale? Maybe both? I love this one. It's sweet. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Papaya

4 Years Ago

Of course. Chocolate... :)
Duh.
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

See, you're learning too!
We make a pretty good team.
Papaya

4 Years Ago

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Ok so first off, I would fall for Toll House temptations...very bad I know, but the ending was such a good twist. Gave me goosebumps! I’d love to find out how the witch does in your fairy tale. Have an amazing week!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Thx, you too!

You never can tell with gingerbread witches. But at least they're fun a.. read more
Nicole

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Yep...they definitely smell nice
I can't see her refusing such a temptingly well-written invitation
Although there is the occasional witch who can be a real b***h
Although I'm betting you've done your homework


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Never been much for homework actually
More of a "seat of my pants" kind of guy
AKA doo.. read more
Standard deviation makes me think of math always but here I think of a young man wandering a different path and finding himself bewitched by some beauty he gazes upon. Does he wish to sample her sweets or steal her away to a happily ever after tale? Maybe both? I love this one. It's sweet. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Papaya

4 Years Ago

Of course. Chocolate... :)
Duh.
Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

See, you're learning too!
We make a pretty good team.
Papaya

4 Years Ago

( :
Spells binding. Like an incantation to lure out an enchanted creature

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dripping Chocolate Madness

4 Years Ago

Exactly.
An open invitation to trouble.
Lol I'm back in a mood again.

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Added on August 9, 2020
Last Updated on August 9, 2020
Tags: nonsense, insanity, fairy tale, gingerbread, witch, play, beautiful

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Dripping Chocolate Madness
Dripping Chocolate Madness

Wandering, RI



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Not a writer, but I do it anyway. I'm also not a chef, musician, masseuse, guidance counselor, philosopher, or survivalist. But again: never stopped me before. I DO, however, happen to be a giant p.. more..

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