Something

Something

A Poem by Vagi
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Backstory- I just loose a friendship, and I have one important exam in 15 days, I was feeling alone, I was crying but felt something, I felt God sitting beside me, It was really unreal feeling!

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___♡Something♡____

I was on the path, moving towards accomplishment, 

I was fighting and winning the battles,

I felt good, seeing people praised

But was the road clear without any troubles?


I was feeling down and depressed, 

Things are not easy as it seems

Clouds of anxiety and self doubt raised,

Each step was harder, as I was near to my dreams,


But I was happy that I was not alone,

There was something that stood with me

The warmth I felt was something known,

I am still searching, what it could be?

And I am sure, it would live forever with me...

© 2024 Vagi


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Vagi
I am still searching for the Title, I need honest reviews, Its my first poem.. though I don't remember if I have written something in childhood!

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Poems are reflections of the poet's feelings; keep writing; it's so beautiful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vagi

4 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Gorgeous writing! This is your first poem? It is amazing for a first poem! keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vagi

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the reply :)

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Added on April 17, 2024
Last Updated on April 17, 2024
Tags: God, Supernatural, Courage, Loneliness, Strong

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Narkatiaganj , Hindu, India



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