Ek Mauka

Hu main ek mauke ke talash main,
Na jane kab milega aur zindagi badal dega,
Fir sochta hu, mila toh bhi kya main use jeet main tabdil kar paunga?
Ye zindagi ka waqt jaha lok apni zindagi banate hai,
Main abhi bhi hu us ek mauke ke talash main,
Jo main jeet lu aur banalu apni zindagi,
Kaha to jata hai sab takdeer ka, nasib ka, khel hai.
Par jante hue bhi,
Ki ye zindagi jeene ka tarika hai,
Hu main ek mauke ke talash main,
Na jane kab milega aur zindagi badal dega,
Ek mauka.

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

We should always get another chance, because we might improve actually...
Amazing poem and written very well :)
Keep it up

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Manasa.L]

Milega zaroor milega, intzaar ki gadi khatam hote hi mauka mil jayega.
Very good writing, I liked it.

[It Will Change]

M glad u liked it...thank you :)

[Surya]

Mil jaaega...by the way It was very good and I liked it...:)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Hope]

I am not so good in Hindi but I enjoyed reading your work:)
I liked the repetition of lines i the poem!
Keep writing, Vaibhav:)

[It Will Change]

Thank you :)

[Hope]

My pleasure:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

After long time you added your writing...Nice to see " KISMAT NE BHI USKO IZZAT BAKSHI JISNE MEHNAT KI HAI... KEHNE KO TO BAAKI SANJOG HAI SAB MAATHE KA "... so always keep trying my bro... never give up.. u will succeed...

[It Will Change]

Yes i will keep trying, thank you and nice lines :)

[Priyanshi]

Very well portrayed it.
"Kaha to jata hai sab takdeer ka, nasib ka, khel hai.
Par jante hue bhi,
Ki ye zindagi jeene ka tarika hai,
Hu main ek mauke ke talash main,
Na jane kab milega aur zindagi badal dega,
Ek mauka."...are so beautiful lines....keep it up.

[It Will Change]

Thank you so much :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.