Loneliness
A Poem by
It Will Change
Y ou search and search
for someone who cares,
anyone who understands...
loneliness,
it hurts,
it kills you deep inside,
it makes you feel empty,
it stops you in your stride,
you cry yourself to sleep,
hugging your pillow tight
wishing for someone
to hold you through the night.
© 2017 It Will Change
Reviews
Short piece, but very touching too. Loneliness is real for many. Well written piece which has a lot of depth to it.
Thank you for sharing.
Mark.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you Mark :)
7 Years Ago
No need to thank me.
I thank you for putting up here.
Mark.
Short but touching most aspects of loneliness. I feel that this is on the descriptive side, but the progressive reveal of details, from just vague feeling to exact actions, is nice. Thanks for sharing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Short but touching most aspects of loneliness. I feel that this is on the descriptive side, but the progressive reveal of details, from just vague feeling to exact actions, is nice. Thanks for sharing!
7 Years Ago
Thanks for reading :)
You have painted the picture of sadness in your short sweet words....we all wish for someone who we can depend on and not to feel lonley...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful creation :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
You have painted the picture of sadness in your short sweet words....we all wish for someone who we can depend on and not to feel lonley...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful creation :)
7 Years Ago
And Thank You for reading :)
I like this poem, a lot. It's sad, but, on the other hand, it's really beautiful, as well. Keep writing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
I like this poem, a lot. It's sad, but, on the other hand, it's really beautiful, as well. Keep writing!
7 Years Ago
Thank you dear :)
7 Years Ago
Your very welcome!!!!
I love this. Short and to the point, yet beautiful at the same time. thanks for sharing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
I love this. Short and to the point, yet beautiful at the same time. thanks for sharing!
7 Years Ago
Thank you dear :)
The emotions have flown like water, in the dark lonely jungle. If the spring of love strikes, it will become alive again or else if the fire of loneliness will burn it down into ashes.
Very nice, beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
The emotions have flown like water, in the dark lonely jungle. If the spring of love strikes, it will become alive again or else if the fire of loneliness will burn it down into ashes.
Very nice, beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
7 Years Ago
even ur review is poetic... :D
Thank you for reading :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you and welcome.
Wow. You have exactly described those emotions. I truly liked it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Wow. You have exactly described those emotions. I truly liked it.
7 Years Ago
m glad u liked it...Thank you :)
7 Years Ago
You're most welcome. ☺
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Added on April 5, 2017
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It Will Change Pune, India
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Hello, my name is Vaibhav, i don't know if i am even a writer, what i mostly do is write down my feelings and some fiction stories.
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