Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by It Will Change

You search and search
for someone who cares,
anyone who understands...
loneliness,
it hurts,
it kills you deep inside,
it makes you feel empty,
it stops you in your stride,
you cry yourself to sleep,
hugging your pillow tight
wishing for someone
to hold you through the night.

© 2017 It Will Change


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Short piece, but very touching too. Loneliness is real for many. Well written piece which has a lot of depth to it.
Thank you for sharing.

Mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

Thank you Mark :)
matrixmark

7 Years Ago

No need to thank me.

I thank you for putting up here.

Mark.
Short but touching most aspects of loneliness. I feel that this is on the descriptive side, but the progressive reveal of details, from just vague feeling to exact actions, is nice. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
You have painted the picture of sadness in your short sweet words....we all wish for someone who we can depend on and not to feel lonley...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful creation :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

And Thank You for reading :)
I like this poem, a lot. It's sad, but, on the other hand, it's really beautiful, as well. Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Anjali

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome!!!!
I love this. Short and to the point, yet beautiful at the same time. thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
The emotions have flown like water, in the dark lonely jungle. If the spring of love strikes, it will become alive again or else if the fire of loneliness will burn it down into ashes.
Very nice, beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

even ur review is poetic... :D
Thank you for reading :)
Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank you and welcome.
Wow. You have exactly described those emotions. I truly liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It Will Change

7 Years Ago

m glad u liked it...Thank you :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome. ☺

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It Will Change
It Will Change

Pune, India



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