lost love

lost love

A Poem by veronica-roni

The one I had
The one I lost
Was someone special
They had no cost
I wish it worked
We broke apart
My heart was scared
from the start
I miss you so
I think of you
Don't forget
What we had was true
You were my love
My one and only
I will never forget
How it feels to be lonely

© 2013 veronica-roni


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passionate and emotional, easily one can sense this one came right from your heart...good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


You did a wonderful job with this. It spoke to me such large amounts of emotion I immediately felt connected to it :) thumbs up dear!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very minimalistic style of writing with some very concise and crisp lines and a lot of emotion.
I personally prefer a little more imagery in poems, but that's just me.

Full marks for effort. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I really felt the emotion in this poem very strong! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a powerful emotional work. Too touching. I love the poem. Keep on the good work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good work, I liked it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work... keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice job KEEP WRITING!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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veronica-roni
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Hello, my name is Veronica and i enjoy life as much as i can. I love my family and friends and without them, i would not be here. Music is a big part of my life and i can really connect to it. I love .. more..