angel boy

angel boy

A Poem by elfthereal
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A guy I fell for, though I do not comprehend how I feel, I know that at least.

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it was a careless meeting,
an unintentional call,
a withered fall of retrograde,
you fought your demons,
fallen down weary, with a broken wing,
returning me frozen,
by your tainted touch.

© 2016 elfthereal


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Short and effective!!! Somewhere the flow of the poem touches the soul, overall good job, amazingly written!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short poem. But a lot in it. Sometimes you need to go with the open mind approach. Is it the person you fell for, or the person you want him to be.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paul Bell

8 Years Ago

Can only do your best.
Cattleya

8 Years Ago

Wow very good
AmorphiusX

8 Years Ago

:O super good!

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Added on December 11, 2016
Last Updated on December 11, 2016
Tags: love, friendship, life

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elfthereal
elfthereal

singapore, singapore, Singapore



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I met a lot people, and met a lot of words, that touched me and both destroyed me. Here I share the feels, more..

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