MY LIFE

Just a poem about my life lately and how much stress i have gone through :)

Everything in my life lately 

Has been such a big mess.

So many things have gone wrong

Its really making me stress.

It's so hard for all this

To just fade away.

I'm hoping my luck will 

turn around someday.

I have been applying

For jobs for so long.

I never get called back,

What have i done wrong?

So many other things

Are turning out bad.

Me getting angry over it

Is making people mad.

It is so hard for me 

To deal with this.

Me being happy is 

What i really miss.

I'm taking it out 

In such a bad way.

I just want to believe

That things will be OK.

Dealing with all this stress

Is really breaking me down.

It's making me so depressed,

It can only make me frown.

I now lost my license,

I can't drive my car.

Getting around by public

Is going to seem so far.

So much depression,

So much bad luck.

It's hard to be positive,

I think i'm really stuck.

I think in time i will 

Actually pull through.

I just need to believe that

This is something i can do.

Author's Note

please view and review :) i would like some feedback and i would like to hear what you thought about it. Thanks it will be much appreciated :)

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

I can relate to the not getting a job thing. It took me 3 years to finally get a permanent job and now I'm out of work again because the shop has closed down! Life really sucks at times, but I think that every bad thing placed in our life is a lesson that we need to learn and also a test. I love how the last stanza was hopeful :)

[mark]

yeah it sucks ive been looking for 2 years and i cant find anything. i actually got anxiety not long ago over it because im stressing too much. im trying to keep positive bout it. im getting my license back in less than 8 weeks now thats making me really happy. i think when i get it back ill have more options for work. i have a few things that im going to be doing in the next few months so im just looking forward to all that and trying to keep happy. and i have my amazing girl to help me :) thanks for your review.

[Laura Harrison]

Good luck with everything! You'll get through it eventually, it just takes time :)

[mark]

yep it certainly does take its time...years in fact and more to wait i think lol

[Bowers]

wow, I am so sorry, and I wish you the best, I get the depression though, and everything going wrong, but I think you indeed can pull through! I really do! (and you have a great girlfriend to be there for you!) this was a great write, though painfully real...

[mark]

thank you so much :) im not feeling like that much anymore i think things are turning around for me now for the good so ill see how things go :) thank you for your review :)

[Bowers]

your very welcome, Im so glad things are going well!

[mark]

thanks :) its not too bad

[Rob Santana]

Damn this how I've been feeling for six months now. We're in the same boat. In time it will get better. For both of us.

[mark]

far really? we had the same experience in those dreams and now life lol...wierd huh.
i believe things will get better its just mainly my license right now i gotta wait another 3 months now. thanks for the review

[wordwarrior]

Yes, just keep believing in your last verse and it will turn around. I am sorry life sucks at the moment and I could feel your sadness and anger in this poem and that's quite understandable.
The rhyme and flow is really good here. Well done!
Write on!

[mark]

thank you so much :)
im trying believe me i am getting worse now though its getting to me more but all people say is not give up but i don't know how much motivation and positive attitude i have left from being unlucky with work and stuff...
but thanks :) i can't give up, you're right i can't make myself do that but i'm close.

[SineadJulia]

I can totally see this being a spoken word piece.
Its easy to relate to and you can feel emotion seeping from it.

[mark]

im glad u can relate to this
thanks for ur kind review :)

[annabellee]

I really hope things will turn around for you soon :) Keep your head up.
Great write, I could totally feel your frustration.
:)

[mark]

thank you anna. i hope they will soon too :) ill try
thank you so much.
im glad you enjoyed it :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[NA]

Hey never give up kiddo, few years from now you'll read this and think how great things are...you've got your health and a sweet girl by your side, the rest will follow soon I'm sure :) x

[mark]

awwww thank you so much raven.
its hard sometimes but your right i have the greatest girlfriend and she helps me through allot of it.
im sure it will too...
thanks so much for your kind words :)

[NA]

ur welcome hun :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You say you cant write about anything but me or love pfffft bullshit.
That is amazing babe see if you think of things in your life..... You can write about anything that's on your mind, because your letting your feelings and emotions out it works and it makes for the best poems when it comes from your heart.
I love it babe i think people will relate to it as well.
The rhyming scheme was great.
Makes people really feel what your feeling.

Life will get better babe, well i cant guarantee that but i doubt it can get worse, we both need to get some good luck sometime.
i love you i hope things start looking up for you :)
you can write about anything you want when you put your heart into it.
Amazing poem babe
kisses and hugs xxxxoooo

[mark]

well i didn't think i could. but i was actually really thinking bout things then.
awwww thank you sweetheart, your're right it feels better too when i let it out like that. im sick of letting it out in anger.
i want to let it out in other ways.
i think so too and glad u like it bub.
thank you :)
yeah i just need to believe that things will fall into place and luck will turn out good for me for once, well both of us.
i love you more and i hope so too :)
i know i can.
it took me to know you for me to get into this.
thanks gorgeous hugs and kisses back hehe
xxxxoooo