IT'S IN YOUR EYES

It's the look in your eyes,

That makes it harder to let you go.

You are my biggest surprise,

This is what you need to know.

When its always fight after fight,

We get upset way too much.

I can never end the night,

Without your hugs, your kisses, your touch.

It's the look in your eyes,

That definitely makes me realize,

That having you is my biggest prize.

Sometimes it's still a big surprise.

It's the look in your eyes,

That makes everything okay.

It's the look in your eyes,

That makes me want to stay.

Your smile on that video today,

Just made me love you more.

I just want to say,

Sorry i stormed out the bus door.

It's your eyes i like looking into,

It helps me forget what we have been through.

You really have no clue,

Just how much i really love you.

It's the cute look in your eyes,

I like to see when you sleep.

It's the look in your eyes,

That says you're the one i must keep.

You seriously don't understand,

How happy your smile makes me.

Now we can take each others hand,

And together we can be free.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i love this one babe the title is great but you will never beat the title of from the heart that was a great title :)
I love you so much im so lucky to have a guy whos so sweet and writes me cute poems, Your so romantic loving and sweet.
Im also sorry if i sometimes take you for granted or don't tell you how amazing you are more often.
Any girl would be so lucky to have you.
Now your my b***h though so they lost there chance when they turned you down they lost someone amazing. No other guy will ever give them or treat them as well as you treat me :)
I love you so much mwa xxxooo
p.s: thank you for entering my life :) but you should know i closed down the exit guess your stuck wid me :P

[mark]

awww thanks babe :) yeah that was a good title idk how i came up with it :P
i love you too and i do that because i love you, if no one does this or does anything cute or romantic to their gf they must not really love them. i love being all romantic with you. your the best. hehe thank you so are you :)
u dont take me for granted at all i take you for granted way too much and im sorry bout that. today when i seen that smile it changed my day :) you looked so cute and happy that day it made my mood really change :)
any girl cant have me now u beat them all :) and im glad you did, i dont think i wouldve lasted with the other girls i liked half as long as i lasted with you. your way sweeter than they will ever be.
haha im your b***h am i?? arent i supposed to say that coz last time i checked im the man :P
im not that amazing babe, well nobody will ever love you as much as i do :)
i love you too my sweet gorgeous girl xxxooo
you're welcome :) thank you for entering mine and i hope u dont exit my life now coz i would really like to start a very nice life with you :)

[MikeV]

The eyes, windows to the soul
very great write! :) the love you two express
to one another is awesome keep it up :)

[mark]

thanks allot mate :)
we will :)

[annabellee]

"And together we can be free"
I loved this line, just like I loved the entire poem, so sweet and honest.
Well done :)

[mark]

yeah i like that line i like how i ended it like that
thanks so much annabelle :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Shanil Mehdi]

That was toooooo beautiful! It flowed perfectly and the power and passion in your words shone through. probably the best poem i've ever read on this site, just brilliant!

[mark]

wow thanks very much mate. really? the best one u read? my other ones r better than that lol. thanks again

[Shanil Mehdi]

well i haven't read your others but i'll take a look at them and see for myself. :P keep up the good work!

[mark]

thanks allot man