Under your Spell

This crazy feeling

This...sexual healing

The fire kindling

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This love I'm feeling

This crazy urge

Soon our bodies will merge

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I was waiting for it

The pain, the pleasure

Your fangs cutting through the leather

I try to hold myself together

But its too late

I'm all the way under

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Nice details of vampire's madness for the lust you've created there...

I just don't know what else to say there, I mean, it's very short and somehow, it feel like it's missing something else, unless I'm missing something here...

However, it's still good tho...

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

I'm gonna hope and pray that that's how my first time will be. lol ^^ That's how much I like this piece. :) Great job!

"The pain, the pleasure/Your fangs cutting through the leather" --My favorite part.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood