Psychopathically Yours

A Collabaration between "Mistress Erica (The Tragic Queen) and "Super Villian"

I'm psychopathically yours down to the pores

We do freaky things behind closed doors

Not porno scenes, just messy murder scenes

By the way, will you accept my wedding ring

I'll only do a life sentence next to you

Now help me set fire to another Jew

I need love, need blood, and a hug

So squeeze me and lets OD on drugs

You're no s**t, but you the tramp

That helped me build a new Death Camp

I love you! I love you! STAB!

Your b***s are the ones I grab

I'm bad but atleast I'm not sad

You're the best lay I've ever had

 

I'm pshycopathically yours

I cut myself every day to make sure this is real

I never feel so close to you until we kill

Then afterwords we use the meat for our dinner meal

We got that s**t from that one movie about a hill

Before you I kneel

Anything for you I'll do

You can shackle me to the bed

Beat the headboard against my head

Sure I'll wear your wedding ring as long as your my Crazy King

Author's Note

“Maybe this is why so many serial killers work in pairs. It's nice not to feel alone in a world full of victims or enemies. It's no wonder Waltraud Wagner, the Austrian Angel of Death, convinced her friends to kill with her.
It just seems natural. You and me against the world...” - Chuck Palahniuk

Reviews

[The Dark Passenger]

very strong emotions and not to mention words being expressed here. I enjoyed the idea of this dangerous love affair though, I believed in the characters, so I think you've definitely done your job right :)
awesome work!
Your rhyming scheme and choice of words also made it sound like song lyrics. post-punk type/ emo stuff. I don't mean that in a derogatory fashion either- I mean old school emotive hardcore as a genre.

[Evil_Angel]

You requested me to read this so I'll give my honest opinion. His sucks yours rocks. His is so cheesy! " yours are the b***s i grab"...."I need love blood and a hug....? lol how stupid.... his part makes the whole thing kinda dumb lol, although I LOVE every line of yours, very sexy and real, haha a little too real but i like it! Good job.

[TamiViolet]

I had to comment on this one. I take no offense, on the contrary, I find this piece an ultimate creation... It is real and surreal...emotional, irrational and impulsive. But extraordinary :-) I find writing attractive when it's exciting. Violent relationships exist, and the fact that both parties are aroused by the violence creates believable disbelief. Layout is visually appealing and concepts are invigorating... Bravo to both of you...indeed!!!

[alyssa]

very descrivtive!!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

this really made me smile for the insane person in me keeps laughing... I think you two captured some great crazy insane emotions in this piece... I personally think it could have flowed better together, but I'm not one to talk about flow... most of my poems need some improvement on that note.... This was really good and you two worked really well together... Great Job! It was very unique and very messed up which made it that much better...

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This was an awesome collaboration! I love the sexy, brutal, and bloodthirsty content in here... kind of reminds me of Bonnie of Clyde. ;)

I was very satisfied when I read it ... again and again. ^^ Sadomasochism does well in my head. lol!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[John Stussy]

Wow, I think you two captured the concept quite well actually.

[Wolfwind Words]

Love, defined in the most diabolical and psychotic way!
Filled with murder, lust, death, racism, religeous persecution... It's got the full gambit of evils cram packed in there.

I have to admit, it's well writen thought. And the images are intense and mortifying.
So I guess you guys did your job as writers.

Very Powerful Write,
Aaron Maycroft

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Wow...this is a unique insite into the mind of the crazy. A great write you two....and very well written. Keep them coming!!!

[Joseph - Michael]

You know, I do enjoy those kind of unusual stories / poems like that every once in a while. Even some of the most "fucked up s**t" I ever read / heard (Pardon my French) BUT, you two just made it look like the perfect love scene that would make Dr. Hannibal Lector so damn proud of (lol)

AnYwAy, all I can say is that you two have made quite "psychotic" love poem I ever read in so long. In fact, I don't think I ever read anything like that before, just one of those screwed up movies, pictures, and news, but not the poetry at all. Would love to read more of your "fucked up" collabarations sometimes soon... Again, pardon my French...