Psychopathically Yours

A Collabaration between "Mistress Erica (The Tragic Queen) and "Super Villian"

I'm psychopathically yours down to the pores

We do freaky things behind closed doors

Not porno scenes, just messy murder scenes

By the way, will you accept my wedding ring

I'll only do a life sentence next to you

Now help me set fire to another Jew

I need love, need blood, and a hug

So squeeze me and lets OD on drugs

You're no s**t, but you the tramp

That helped me build a new Death Camp

I love you! I love you! STAB!

Your b***s are the ones I grab

I'm bad but atleast I'm not sad

You're the best lay I've ever had

 

I'm pshycopathically yours

I cut myself every day to make sure this is real

I never feel so close to you until we kill

Then afterwords we use the meat for our dinner meal

We got that s**t from that one movie about a hill

Before you I kneel

Anything for you I'll do

You can shackle me to the bed

Beat the headboard against my head

Sure I'll wear your wedding ring as long as your my Crazy King

Author's Note

“Maybe this is why so many serial killers work in pairs. It's nice not to feel alone in a world full of victims or enemies. It's no wonder Waltraud Wagner, the Austrian Angel of Death, convinced her friends to kill with her.
It just seems natural. You and me against the world...” - Chuck Palahniuk

Reviews

[The Dark Passenger]

very strong emotions and not to mention words being expressed here. I enjoyed the idea of this dangerous love affair though, I believed in the characters, so I think you've definitely done your job right :)
awesome work!
Your rhyming scheme and choice of words also made it sound like song lyrics. post-punk type/ emo stuff. I don't mean that in a derogatory fashion either- I mean old school emotive hardcore as a genre.

I didn't get offended at all, the emotions are strong and I love how your both put it together, like a two singers doing a duo on a song>

[LeLa]

It was interesting. Not my taste but should attract someone.

[.:DelicateAdelle:.]

Oh my god !!! Wow. It's powerful , and sick! An awesome combination ! It ebbed in my mind , I could almost feel the pores in my skin vibrate ! Awesome write. (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow what a very interesting piece... I think of the movie "Natural Born Killers" when I read this... a dark love built on hate for others ... Nice job to the both of you.

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

I love this chick so very much that I'm going to do another poem with her as soon as possible! WHOOOO!!!

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

I wasn't sure if this was written in attempt to shock the reader, or raise a smile. For me, it took the latter course. I really enjoyed it, racist remarks and all. Well done to the both of you...

[Larissa G.]

Hm. It sounded like horror rap to me. I'm still not sure what to think, truthfully. It's a bit different from my usual preference, but since I know that doesn't necessarily mean it's bad...I don't know what to say. ^_^0
I don't hate it. I guess that's good, considering I usually hate things along this line of work.
Keep writing. :)

[nightmask]

this is really good! :)

[Manhunt[er]]

These kinds of stories are my pride and joy! I LOVED it. Great piece, I wil add it to my favorites!