Hell Goddess Queen

Just someting that I wrote down on a whim!

The fire in her eyes seem as hot as the depths of Hell

The burn in her touch makes my body swell

I don't know if I should purr or yell

This fiery women in front of me demands that I fall on my knees

I look at her questionly but does as she please

She looks at me ecpectantly

With a shaky voice I say "What do you ask of me?"

A voice that is silky as satin says "I want you to bow to me."

"Before I bow to you a name you should give me."

"My name is Mistress E and I demand that you bow to me."

I again does as she please

And now for eternity I am the slave of Mistress E, Hell Goddess Queen

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This was very well done, I loved the flow and feel of the piece... It's very dark and your images were very good... This kind of reminded me of a part of a Laurell K Hamilton book that i just read... A great piece... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the dark and mysterious and this is fantastic... I bow to Mistress E myself.

[Wolfwind Words]

You forgot the last part!
When the slave finally bows to Mistress E, they whip out a magical feather and begin to tickle the Goddess' toes. The Mistress collapses in a fit of laughter as the slave binds her hands; draging her off to his cave.

Great Poem!
Infinity's Shadow

[.:DelicateAdelle:.]

Nice, XDD.
I love how you absolutely intimidate, and DEMAND. =D
You're just like, "Pfft, bow at my feet peasant," I loveee that! :D

[Legion]

Viciously wicked. A few spelling typos, but pretty impressive.