Listen

A poem by Mistress Erica (The Tragic Queen)

Listen to my voice, my actions, my words

Not the bounce of my breast

or the sway of my hips

Listen to my voice, my actions, my words

Not the way my lips moves

nor if I'm skinny or fat

Listen to my voice, my actions, my words

Listen to me as a women with intelligence in my eyes

Not as a women with breast but as a women with a goal

Please,please

Listen to my vocie, my actions, my words

 

Just LISTEN

Author's Note

Men period don't listen to me as a women but just look at my breast so I felt moved to write this poem...I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

I got that point loud and clear:). It's sad that men tend to be distracted
by breasts that just sit there and don't talk...BUT oh, wait, some of them
want just that, to sit there and don't talk LOL!! My advice, anytime you
get a chance make your point, show off your mind;). Thank you so much
for your kind words on my poem. AD

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

As stated a good point. We should all be taken for who were are and not because of how we look. The inside of a person is truely marvelous if some should take the time to find out. We are each unique. A wonderful write!

[Wolfwind Words]

I'm listening! ;) You bring a valid point to bear here. It's true, many people look only at the surface and not whats on the inside.

My take is, if one only see's you for what you are on the outside, they really don't need to see or know anything more. They can go packing for the door.

Great Poem! :)

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This is very good. I loved the statement you made. Very good!

Its a awsome poem to read, there is no other words to put in my opition. The word you feel is really felt on the poem and also how you tell us the read in what way man don't listen you.