She's all I want

I see her

She's as beautiful as I remember

Long flowing hair that falls in timbers

I wonder if she knows I'm watching

What if she turns around---Oh god I have to hide

She walks with an elegant grace

I love the dimple in her right cheek

She looks so innocent but down deep shes as spicy as the other girls I meet

I wonder what she'd say if I asked her out?

I'll never know if I don't try....right?

I tap her shoulder with my trembling fingers

She turns around with a smile

And says "I was wondering when you was going to ask!"

 

 

Author's Note

I know this is not my best...It's a happy ending at least...

Reviews

[rash]

that is nice. i like it.

[Orlando Murcia]

I liked the ending it was short but I can honestly say I truly enjoyed this piece.

Great job!!!

Orlando M

[LeLa]

So true. Why does it always take them so long to figure out we wanted them to ask? Probably a question we will never know the answer too and will just have to continue waiting for the that tap.

[Legion]

No harm in asking. :) I like it. Glad you got your happy ending.

Was just checking out your profile page. I love the pics you have put on there. Awesome. I see you are an Evanescence fan as well. Love 'em. You should check out Lacuna Coil and Within Temptation also (especially the latter). If you get a chance, check out my song/poem "The Curse From Madame Rouge". I think you'll like it. Ciao.

Nice job, you can tell the answer from her is going to be yes...

[ProseAspiration]

Ooo, surprise surprise, all worried for nothing. A brief but inportant moment in anyones life, I hope it works out between them...

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

AAARRRRGGGG......What was the answer? Oh no, getting the courage to ask someone out and then not findng out a great way to keep us all guessing. A nice piece well put together....Great work!

[JC Fox]

I like this poem great job!

[Wolfwind Words]

Bravo! Success!
Succulent, tense but in the end happy!
Not to sure about the mexican mean part. a little to masculine.
I can't wait for your romance novel! lol