TRAGIC QUEEN (ACROSTIC)

Today was the day we were to be married

Right here in our own backyard

After sunset when the night was young

Guess you thought it was a game

Interrupting our service with your drunken slur

Can a wife kill her husband without remorse?

 

Quiet as a cat did I sneak to your room

Unity means nothing to me now

Ever so slightly did I lift the knife

Everywhere there was blood

Nothing felt as good as that

Author's Note

I even shower with my pen, in case any ideas drip out of the waterhead. ~Graycie Harmon

Reviews

[Catastrophe]

wow, this is not something i read everyday;
i love the question...
"Can a wife kill her husband without remorse?"

that has such amazing impact, lovely.

[Shadow_doll]

Ive never read anything like this before. Its wonderful because I can really see this whole scene playing out in my head. I like how you had the capitialized letters spell out the name of the peice.
Great job, keep it up.
Shadow_doll

[Nicholas Hallows]

Tragic indeed. I love the line: 'After sunset when the night was young'.
Nothing is more deadly than a woman scorned and I am glad I don't drink.
NH

[Wolfwind Words]

Is this a warning for men not to get drunk on their wedding night, or else?! lol
I liked the tormented imagery. As it almost seemed in the end the wife to be enjoyed being sprayed with the blood of the husband to be.
Totaly dark and strong!
I liked it!