Rememberance

A poem by Mistress Erica (Keeper of Secrets) This was also written after I watched the first eprisode of "Supernatural" :)

He looks at me like I'm dead

He looks like he doesn't hear me right behind him

I tell him I'm sorry over and over agian, though I don't know why

I yell "WHY AREN'T YOU LISTENING TO ME?"

But he doesn't seem to hear my plea

He's looking at something....I think it's a picture--Yes it's the picture Bethany took of me at the Statue of Liberty

He's looking at that picture like he wants to strangle me but also hug me and never let go

Then when I'm about to touch him he yells "You killed our kids....Damn you.....You killed our" *Sob*

At first I don't understand what he's saying and then I remember

I am dead, I killed my two beautiful little girls, And I killed myself

 

Author's Note

Ignore any grammer mistakes...Tell me if its good or bad....I want what you have to say!

Reviews

[Cherryblossom]

you left me confused at first, but I see the meaning clearly now. Such a creative piece. Good Job.

[~crazy Beautiful~]

Very creative piece, it seemed very visual although i don't believe it was written in that way. This definitely moved me, so sad to think that this kind of stuff does really happen.
beautifully brutal poetry
with a twist at the end
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[eddie]

wow this has alot of strong meaning to it...i like it alot....

[Wolfwind Words]

WoW, that ended with a twist i wasn't expecting! What a stomach punch of emotions, I liked how you rolled this from beginning like you were alive, then to ending it with your character being dead.
A lot of emotion on this one
GReat job Erica!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

This is a good piece, I did not realise what was happening until the end when it turns out she is dead and responsible for murder? And the guy is remembering what happened by looking at the picture and thinking back.....a nicely written piece!