Valentine's Day

I loved you

You loved me

It was always what we thought it to be

We got married immediatley

Then on febuary 14th you left me

Now standing over your grave I say"Happy Annerversary, Honey"

Author's Note

Say what you please!

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

This is so sad, such a brutal ending, a tragedy. I feel like the words were missing some more of the emotion, somewhat less descriptive of the love you had. This is a beautifully brutal piece, i would never wish such a loss on anyone.
This piece don't get me wrong is quite good as it stands, but upon some expansion could be amazing.
thank you for entering my contest.

[Marie]

Amazing. That was so powerful, and a twist at the end! Great work, Erica.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

This is such a wonderful and powerful write. A great job...good luck in the contest!

[Brianna Brie]

Thank you for entering my contest. It definitely took me by surprise thinking him to be some sort of louse. Instead you hit my compassionate side while I was off guard. Great write and good luck!