Our Friendship is Forever

This was written for one of Keith's poems (Captian Blackheart)

Your Timeless love holds me like prison

Your infectous love is like my poison

If my mother saw me like this it'd be all confusion

But my friendship with you is never endin'! 

Author's Note

Ignore grammer mistakes!

Reviews

[John Stussy]

It's great, although I don't know if it needs to be this big of a font, pretty in your face for a more gentle poem. Great work though, putting the formatting aside. Different way to describe a friend, as a prison and poison, but i guess it works, a prison to keep the havoc of the world out, a poison to take you from this life and bring you to a form of heaven for a few moments. Then again, I could not know what the hell I am talking about and may just be seeing something else. But what I see is great.

[Wolfwind Words]

Cool poem, reminds me of something out of the romantic tales of Pirates of the Carribean!
The strong willed woman, who will go the distance for what she believes!

[Marie]

This was an excellent poem, Haunted. Thanks for sharing.

[Brianna Brie]

Hmmm? I wonder if it is really just a friendship. I am coming out of a controlling relationship, and this just has that feel. Enjoyed reading it.

[Emily B]

This is a great poem of friendship!

[R J Askew]

from prison to poison with a little confusion...i like it, but especially like the endin'

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Oh seem to me like your eternally in love with a friend. (the way I read it). My fav line has to be the first line - Your Timeless love holds me like prison.

Keith

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Lovely poem. Simple and beautiful. ^_^