South Of Heaven.

i don't know, you tell me.

-South Of Heaven-

I care not for the light,

For ferry animals, nor the smiles they conjure,

I'm indifferent to the cries of those in constant torment,

The hungry 'n the wanting,

I feel the thick disgust my maker has for me,

And I look in those ancient and all knowing eyes and smile,

For this is where i draw my purpose,

Just south of heaven. 

 

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[Sami Khalil]

"I feel the thick disgust my maker has for me,




And I look in those ancient and all knowing eyes and smile,




For this is where i draw my purpose,




Just south of heaven. "

A very unique write. Thank you for sharing...:)........

[VALENTINE]

Thanx for the input, much aprish.

[MoriartyMesa]

One or three edits are needed, but i understand

[VALENTINE]

Give feedback, thats if you can.