Still Your CRUSH

" STILL YOUR CRUSH "

We grew up together 

Like those two tree

Which we had planted 

At the age of three

Teenagers we were 

When your heart fell for me 

But I was the idiot

To mock at thee

Always ignored them,

The signs of your love

Shown by you through a gift

The pair of dove 

 

I realized every thing 

When you both were together on that day 

Saw you with a boy 

Holding hands together at the bay

Things and  the time,

Have changed in a rush

As he is your boyfriend 

But I am still your crush

~uTkArSh SiNgH

Author's Note

rainbow presentation (VIBGOYR)....... ;)

Reviews

[Saddam]

Things and the time,
Have changed in a rush
As he is your boyfriend
But I am still your crush.

Too sweet but ending was most awefull. You have a different sight for love. I really appreciate your talent.

[Utkarsh Singh]

ssadd thanks for the last line ....... :)

[Ayushi]

"I realized every thing
When you both were together on that day
Saw you with a boy
Holding hands together at the bay"..
Sometimes we realize that we love someone only when we see them with someone else.
Short and sweet poem :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

true line of urs .when i was writting this poem i had different concept in my mind but later on it switched to this one ....thanks for the review dear .... :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

Aww too bad it wasn't realised earlier... maybe she can be won back. Nice poem :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

lets see ..........i have to asked that boy does he still loves her or not ...then only he can won her back ....... ;)....btw thanks for the review ...:)

[Mirra]

Awww! Such a lovely poem. The rainbow colors of each stanzas made it look fun and sweet.
"As he is your boyfriend
But I am still your crush"
These lines gave me a smile, thought it was really sweet ^_^!

[Utkarsh Singh]

keep reading my poems n keep smiling ,,,,, :) n special thanks for the last sentence ........ :D

[Mirra]

You're welcome ^_^!

[Utkarsh Singh]

.......... :)

[Pi]

Such a great poem! Keep up the good work :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks pi ..... :)

[Pi]

Any time :)

[New Theory]

Good poem. Innocent and very close to heart

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks brother

[New Theory]

You are welcome

[Eddie Phillips]

A very honest look at the experience of young love.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks eddie for your kind review ...:D

[Honey-Bee]

Cute poem about young love! Enjoyed the read!

[Utkarsh Singh]

honey thanks dear ........:D

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing...:)...........

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks for the stop sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............................

[Utkarsh Singh]

....................:D

[Sami Khalil]

:),...................

[Vidya Bacchus]

We tend to take things and people for granted and only when we lose them do we truly appreciate what we had :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

exactly vidya ........ :/

[Vidya Bacchus]

................:)