Still Your CRUSH

" STILL YOUR CRUSH "

We grew up together 

Like those two tree

Which we had planted 

At the age of three

Teenagers we were 

When your heart fell for me 

But I was the idiot

To mock at thee

Always ignored them,

The signs of your love

Shown by you through a gift

The pair of dove 

 

I realized every thing 

When you both were together on that day 

Saw you with a boy 

Holding hands together at the bay

Things and  the time,

Have changed in a rush

As he is your boyfriend 

But I am still your crush

~uTkArSh SiNgH

Author's Note

rainbow presentation (VIBGOYR)....... ;)

Reviews

[Anahat]

Wow..amazingly beautiful.. :)
Well done!

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks for the review anahat

[Sami Khalil]

"Things and the time,
Have changed in a rush
As he is your boyfriend
But I am still your crush"

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks sami .....:D

[Sami Khalil]

:).........................

[Parimal Pratyush]

Absolutely beautiful. We seem to ignore the one who has been loving us all the while and when we truly understand their gestures and feelings, they are already gone. Great work.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank parimal for the stop and this sweet review

[yuki]

its really touching very good

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks yuki

[Addy]

So sad but amazing. I love it

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks addy .......:D

[Life Pal]

So sad to know that but your poem is nice.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you very much angle

[vaishnavi]

actually the color of rainbow goes ROY GBIV
but still the writing piece is interesting and colorful

[Utkarsh Singh]

vaishnavi its VIBGOYR only ....if you remember that prism diagram .....
we read it from bottom to top
R
O
Y
G
B
I
V
btw thanks for the review

[vaishnavi]

ok i dont want to start a debate on the colors but btw
your welcome

[Nena]

That was so sad. Yet, Neatly done :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks nena .......... :)

[Bowers]

haha! wow, this is .... amazing! I absolutely love this poem, very fun and such a fast read! I love the message, although very sad, it is still very clear, and relatable.... great write!

[Utkarsh Singh]

thnks bowers for the stop...and for the awesome review.......keep reading my poems n keep smiling ... :D

[Penny]

What a sweet little ballad! Yuno, sometimes we just need to express our pains as plainly and easily as they came to us and thats what you have done here. Marvellous. Reminds me of a Hindi verse I wrote. Keep it up.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks penny .. :) ...and can you please mail me your Hindi verse that u wrote ....... ?

[Penny]

.Sure. Its not exactly the same subject but similar.

[Utkarsh Singh]

ok .but i want to read it ...... :)

[Penny]

I've just sent it :-)

[Utkarsh Singh]

hm got it ..... (y)