BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED

" BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED "

All are fool

To fly in the sky 

Risk their life 

To feed on worms 

Live in cage 

Where no one attacks you 

Without  struggle 

Satisfy your belly .

~UTKARSH SINGH

Reviews

[Glass Heart Inc]

Interesting opinion. Just remember that "there" refers to a place, and "their" means belonging to them. I also think that birds value freedom more than you might think... Like, if you lived in prison you wouldn't have to support yourself anymore. People would give you food, but it wouldn't be nice for you... But I am basing my rating on your writing quality (according to me) and not your opinions. I think the poem is good. Interesting that you only used a full stop in one place, at the end, and that's the only punctuation marks you chose to use.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you very much Encantado for correcting me b/t there their......

[Glass Heart Inc]

You're welcome. I see you have fixed it.

[Utkarsh Singh]

ya once again thank you for correcting me ......

[Saddam]

Intresting piece of art dear..... So vividly put your openion. But every one fight for freedom.

[Utkarsh Singh]

ya its true that every one fight for freedom bt today comfort is prefferd more ...........so i wrote it ... :

[Saddam]

LOVELY...............

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanx ssadd..........

[Rachelle]

Reverse psychology, Utkarsh! Very effective! To stay in your comfort zone and never venture out beyond your comfort zone is indeed likened to being caged. To risk beyond the caged walls and to soar - even if you have to suffer - is indeed what we, like birds, are meant to do…. and in doing so, we discover who we truly can be and what we can do.

Bravo!

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you rachelle...........i had a parrot and it liked to b caged it roam full day in entire my house and at night finally return to its cage.thats why i wrote this ........ :/