BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED

" BIRD LIKE TO BE CAGED "

All are fool

To fly in the sky 

Risk their life 

To feed on worms 

Live in cage 

Where no one attacks you 

Without  struggle 

Satisfy your belly .

~UTKARSH SINGH

Reviews

[Glass Heart Inc]

Interesting opinion. Just remember that "there" refers to a place, and "their" means belonging to them. I also think that birds value freedom more than you might think... Like, if you lived in prison you wouldn't have to support yourself anymore. People would give you food, but it wouldn't be nice for you... But I am basing my rating on your writing quality (according to me) and not your opinions. I think the poem is good. Interesting that you only used a full stop in one place, at the end, and that's the only punctuation marks you chose to use.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you very much Encantado for correcting me b/t there their......

[Glass Heart Inc]

You're welcome. I see you have fixed it.

[Utkarsh Singh]

ya once again thank you for correcting me ......

[Mary Ochoa]

Very interesting poem! Well written:) I enjoyed the read.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks mary.....:D

[Mary Ochoa]

You're welcome! :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

...........:D

[William Wapi]

Interesting thought there. I want to be like the bird that flies through the sky and goes places rather than the bird that stays caged and has great meals. Freedom is everything to everyone and anything--even a bird! Nice poem anyway.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanks william .......i was waiting for ur review....... .finally i got it ...........:D

[Pi]

I think your opinion is interesting, but I don't necessarily agree with you! :D It's a nice poem though :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

thanx for ur review pi

[Nena]

Nice but somehow we all want freedom and why be caged just cuz your scared? Life is about risks so be it!

[Utkarsh Singh]

i think u r right ....(y)

[Nena]

:) keep writing!

[Utkarsh Singh]

ya sure ...... :D

[BlackBird's Productions]

Interesting take on the freedom of a bird. I like it. Short and sweet.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you black bird

[Ruth]

Interesting - seldom do we see the reversal of freedom as anthing good - small mercies in both, I suppose - until we realise we are all prisoners, in some way - well written x

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you poppy

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

I would stay in my cage if it was made of gold and everyday a plate of salmon steak is served by a handsome personal butler. Sadly, my home is only made of straws and my daily diet is cheap ramen from the stores, so I have no choice but to get out there and struggle for my salary. By the way, this is a very nice and thoughtful poem.

[Utkarsh Singh]

thank you LSG....

[New Theory]

My soul shall not be chained..
My mind not blinded...
I shall take those unknown steps...
Either I will fly high or die trying

[Utkarsh Singh]

NT i know that every one in this world like to be unchained..............bt there are many who are addicted to take easy way rather the hard one .....that bird (about whome i have written) is getting food without any hard work and even getting shelter against rain and other enemies.....so it liked to be caged rather to roam in wilderness...though i agree with u ...thank for reviewing me ..........:D :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

We would rather stay in a cage where it is safe than roam free where we might encounter conflict.Well penned my friend and wise words true :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

thnx vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome)

[Utkarsh Singh]

ma pleasure....... :D

[Bhavana Singh]

It may seem offensive but most of us in present times look for comfort rather than venturing out in wilderness. Thank for putting the reality! :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

glad u like it ....n thanks for the review...