Blazing Sky

A musing of the sun and its journey of the earth

Oceans of Blue

         Skies of Amber

 

  Reflecting rays of another day

         Gone forever

 

On the crystal clear waters

         With mysteries untold

 

  Another day sets

         Its path set now in stone

 

As the sun

         Drifts away

 

  Kissing the sea

         here today

 

Somewhere else

         It awakens a new place

 

  Full of hopes renewed

         promises for few

 

Love yet to be written

         The blazing stars journey

 

  Resting for you

         While bringing hope anew

 

With oh so much to do

         traveling the world 

                  every day just for you 

 

On this star

        More wishes made

 

  Promises of

         A brand new day

 

Procrastinations

         A dreamers heart waits

 

  Made on tiny stars

         with a blaze they start

 

Burning brightly

         day and night

 

  This amazing blaze

         so bright, so true

 

Never rests

         Just a world renewed

 

  Day by day 

        we wake and say 

 

Today I'll do it 

         by night we pray 

 

  Gazing into the heavens above

         searching for a reminding glow

 

By and by 

         gazing high

 

  Searching,

         hoping, 

              asking the sky

                          give us just 

                                  one more day.

 

       Ursula Kay Vos 10/21/2011 

 

 

Author's Note

The spacing of this poem was done for effect and for the flow of the poem and the way it was meant to be read. The idea although not directly stated is that tomorrow is not promised to us. That is the unertone, and the obvious theme is the grandeur of the suns journey every day. Your comments and feeback is always welcome and appreciated! I am attempting to branch out a bit and not become stuck in one style of writing (i.e. romance or personal experience) but to expand my writing capabilities. While all of my writing draws from my own life to some extent my own experiences and beliefs, I do want to be a versitile writer. So here is one attempt at that. Let me know what you think! Thank you! :) UKV

Reviews

[nenestarrs]

I liked how you paced this poem. It does remind us that tomorrow is not a guarantee and that we should enjoy today. I thought you did a fantastic job in bringing the feeling out in this piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh such lovely inspiration... I really love the spirituality of this piece and the feeling of endless faith.

This is so wonderful, so precious. I loved every line and every word. Excellent poem. xx

[EMF]

Wonderful. I loved every second of it. Wonderful. For the record... You are a writer. And a versitile one at that. Brilliant work

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully expressed, A lot of us take life for granted and we should live as though the next second, minute or day is not promised!