A Man Too Good For Dreams

Life with you

Is Love without Bounds

Heaven with No clouds

The air on a rainy day

All things Beautiful

Touching my heart in such a special way

 

Like an unwritten poem

The words etched on my heart

Left by a beautiful night 

Never wanting this to end

The gaze that tickles my soul

And subdues my heart

 

 

Looking into your eyes

As we deepen our bond

This thing that we share

Solid as the crust of the earth

Deeper still with each flutter

The molten rock that bubbles below

Would pale to compare

 

The song sung by our hearts

Heard deep within our souls

As your body touches mine

I feel I've no control

 

This man before me

The one I've prayed

So many nights

So many days

 

Now you're here

Staring into my eyes

Deep into my soul

A look I've never seen before 

 

Love has taken hold

My dreams outdone

My hopes could never glean

This man before me

Too good for dreams

 

Dedicated to Frank M. R. Jr. my man too good for dreams

 

Ursula Kay Vos 10/8/2011  

Author's Note

Your feedback is always welcome and appreciated! I want to Thank everyone for their feedback so far. The revisions so far are just edits of gramatical errors. :)
Thank you! UKV

Reviews

[Chris]

No "fluffies"... these thoughts you expressed deserve flaws corrected - BECAUSE you opened your life and heart...

"Now your here" - "your" - you're (you are)
"To good for dreams" - "To" - too
"my man to good for dreams" - "to" - too

they ARE minor nothings but - leaving them will just lessen you in "knowing" eyes and after putting yourself into this the way you have - well, it wouldn't be fair.

so just fix em and delete this comment...

Chris

[Liza]

a woman is a treasure, love is a pleasure, so liberating it causes some to do crazy things out of fear of loss - like caging up that treasure; minimizing the pleasure...even too good for dreams...enjoyed this poetic expression from an insightful heart.

[EMF]

Well worht featuring. A mervelous poem

[EMF]

A wonderful poem to a lucky man. Blissfully simple with lovely wordplay that speaks of passion and love . WOnderful read