IT

everyone has an it

As I sit here

       with my bleeding wrists

I stare at wonder

       of how it came to this.

You said you loved me

       I said I did too

but then IT happened

       It seemed IT wasn't true.

I ignored IT

       and just went on.

But then IT happened again

       and IT hurt for so long.

Then the hurt led me

        to my decision

To take the pain out on myself

        as my Love-Hate collision.

But if you ever find out

        First you'll sigh your sigh

Then you'll do IT again

        and I'll want to die.

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, such a powerful work of storms, and your words flow straight through, to the readers heart in ways that causes the meaning to linger and subside in the residue of depression's aftermath, and that being pain and loneliness, you have a talented way with form, and I sincerely enjoyed reading this, excellent job!

[Reika]

IT can just die. Really, IT can.. I can relate to this. A LOT.
This poem reached down in me and brought out feelings that no one should ever have to feel.
I like this poem.
Wonderful job.

[QuietPoet]

I liked this. But so sad. I have felt this way before. Nicely written.

[Lestat's daughter]

I like this one a lot.

[Adela Muresan]

Slam reflection of love's consequences.
Yu got a good idea wit the IT, and it's true that we all have an it�lolz.

A.M.

[UpComesDown]

This poem gives me chills

[jumbie's #1 fan]

IT sucks. I'm going to take IT and cut IT's wrists open and see how IT feels. hahaha

[poetforlife]

I've been through this pain and know it well. Thanks for sharing.