Just look up and see...

self explainatary

Running, Rushing

Past each other

The city around them

These two twin brothers

 

They dont look alike

talk alike or act alike

they arent even the same age

Because they lost sight

 

They forgot what it means

to be a human

Interactions with others

is a seemingly sin.

 

They don't seem to care

what the guy behind them is doing

Why? They dont have a life

so who cares if they're hissing and booing

 

If they looked up and around

and they would finaly see

that these two twin brothers

are just you and me

 

So if we just look up to see

others lives beside our own

then we could see others

Like us, heading home.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Reika]

I do like this poem!
I especially love the two twin brothers thing.
I enjoyed reading it out loud, twas fun!

^_^

[Traces]

Oh, I did enjoy reading this poem. Well thought out and the feelings in this poem are very moving. Welcome to WritersCafe. Holly

[Kitty Forzaken]

pretty cool..

[Adrian K. Smith]

Somebody that has not lived in, worked in, or otherwise visited a major city may miss out on parts of this. Come rush hour at the end of the day, the blinders go up, the people become scenery, and you just want to get home.